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Tuesday, October 27, 2020

                  

                                       

One sunny day a girl went downstairs to see her pet giraffe. She was so excited and happy.

But when she went outside to check on the lead but her giraffe was not there. She was sad and shocked. 

So she looked In her backyard bush’s , but she couldn't find her giraffe. She was lonely and worried.

Then she got her crayons and made lost pet giraffe posters. She felt calm. Then she went to tell people have you seen a tall giraffe but people sad no. She was so lonely and upset now. So she went to a park then her giraffe popped up. She was amazed. She smiled and went home with her tall necked giraffe. It was a happy ending. 

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1 comment:

  1. Mrs CassidyDecember 30, 2020 at 4:36 PM

    Hello Sophia.
    I started reading your story and couldn't wait to see how it ended.Then I encountered a problem.
    Your story then went along the page which made it hard to read.
    Can you change the direction so that it goes downwards please?.
    Thank you.

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