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Thursday, August 12, 2021

Underwater Olympics writing

On your mark, get set, GO!. I swam over the hurdles as fast as I could. I was as fast as a cheatah. Yay! I was in the lead. After all i was the olympic star. Ow my muscles started hurting!. Then a giant fish was coming. I quickly dodged It.Phew!. But I came last. It was still fun though.
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2021 at 9:45 AM

    Talofa Sophia I like the post because you put a lot of efort in this post.I like your picture because there is three people in the picture but mine doesn't have three it only has 1.

    bye have a great

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  2. Jane CliffordAugust 13, 2021 at 9:37 AM

    Well done Sophia. You have taken your hook in different direction and I love your creative thinking - as usual! Ka pai!

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    1. AnonymousAugust 13, 2021 at 9:55 AM

      Hello Miss Clifford, thank you and I hope your feeling well :)

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  3. AnonymousAugust 13, 2021 at 10:19 AM

    Hi sophia i like how you said a giant fish was coming, this reminds me of when i went swimmimng with my mum at the pools when i was 6 or 7 yrs old.
    mabye next time you can add a little more story but i really like your creation.

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  4. Mrs CassidyAugust 18, 2021 at 11:34 AM

    It wasn't a giant fish Sophia,it was me.I was dressed as a dolphin.I hope I didn't scare you.I decided to support the participants by going underwater too.

    It doesn't matter where you place as long as you tried your best.
    Love the use of punctuation.Well done.

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  5. Mrs CassidyAugust 24, 2021 at 11:57 AM

    Good morning Sophia.
    I am just leaving a quick comment to let you know that I checked out your blog today.
    Take care and keep safe.

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  6. Mrs CassidyAugust 27, 2021 at 9:10 AM

    Have a safe and happy day Sophia.
    I hope all is going well for you and your family.

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  7. Mrs CassidyAugust 30, 2021 at 12:32 PM

    God afternoon Sophia.
    I've been watching some of the Paralympics that are on at the moment.I watched some wheel chair rugby and some swimming.
    Have you seen any of it during lock down?.
    Take care and keep safe.

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  8. Mrs CassidySeptember 1, 2021 at 3:50 PM

    I am just leaving a message to wish you a happy week Sophia.

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  9. Mrs CassidySeptember 4, 2021 at 4:25 PM

    I can't wait to see what you have been working on during lock down Sophia.
    Have a wonderful weekend.

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  10. Mrs CassidySeptember 9, 2021 at 3:45 PM

    It was great to see your smiling face this morning Sophia.I hope you had a great day.

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