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Thursday, March 18, 2021

My tree story

 I hope you like it. it is about me finding a man tree that can talk.

                       The magnificent talking man tree

One normal sunny bright nice lovely day me and my family were going on a walk into the Forest. So I said to my parents I’ll walk by myself. When I was walking I saw this weird shaped tree. Then it said “hello I am the Talking man tree”. I said “Hi I’m Liz Tan”. Then the Man tree said “I’m glad you're here because I got stuck here as a tree years ago”. “Really?!” I said. “shhhhh be quiet” he said quietly. “Okay”. Then I went back to my parents. They asked “how was the walk?”. “It was okay,” I said. 


2 comments:

  1. WOW Sophia.
    This was a really great story that made me want to read more.I think that there is so much more you could add.
    You have a good imagination and I would love to know more about the Tree Man.
    Do you think that the man wanted to live his life as a tree forever?.

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  2. I love this 100 word challenge Sophia. Ka Pai!

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