As I walk on the old fragile and wobbly roads I start to feel anxious.
There were a-lot of wooden houses and the sun was just rising.
The giant lake was beautiful.
The air smelt fresh as ice.
Bang! CrAsH! The large Barrels full of carrots were everywhere!.
Seagulls were skuriking.
There were alot of people walking along the roads and selling stuff like food, swords, blankets, water, pillows, air mattresses, shields and bows, arrows.
Shields were being built. Swords were being sharpened
I think its a warriors village…
Lovely piece of descriptive writing Sophia. You have personification, similes and onomatopoeia.As a reader this is very interesting and you certainly paint a picture for me. Tino Pai.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sophia for sharing a great story.
ReplyDeleteYou used some great words to describe what you could see and hear.
Thank you also for showing and letting me try your riroriro quiz.
Did it take you long to create the quiz?.
Hello Sophia.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.