I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, August 6, 2021
Narrative writing
Anna woke up at 3:00 in the morning. She could not get back to sleep. She got dressed and went to her new mirror she brought from the market. She had really long hair so she tied it into a bun. Until … the magic mirror sucked her in!. Anna had woken up in a bed. She got up. Anna then spotted a letter on the table. The letter said, Hello Anna, I see you are reading this letter. I put you in this challenge because you should be able to solve the story?. Well, Goodluck the magic mirror said. “Oh no!” Anna said. So Anna went outside. She went into the forest and got lost. Until she saw a little two story cottage. She went inside. Anna smelt something very good. It was porridge. There were three chairs. Anna sat on chair three. It was too small. Then chair one was way too big. Anna finally went to the medium chair. It was perfect. She ate the porridge. Then she decided to sleep. She slept in the middle bed. Then suddenly three bears came in and the little bear said “waa mummy a girl is sleeping in your bed”. Anna quickly woke up and screamed. She ran out as quickly as she could. She finally woke up she was still in her pjs. It was a dream phew!.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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WOW Sophia-what an interesting story.I wasn't sure what was going to happen so I HAD to keep reading.You words were powerful and dragged me in.
ReplyDeleteWhat did Anna have on the porridge?.
thanks you Mrs Cassidy. She had strawberry's on it
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