I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
onomatopoeia
We have been looking at ways to add impact to our narratives. We found that onomatopoeia enhances our stories. Here is my onomatopoeia. It is not fully finished yet but I hope you still like it.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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It might not be finished yet Sophia,but what you have done so far,looks REALLY good!.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the yellow things.They remind me of popcorn.
I look forward to seeing it complete.
Have a wonderful week and thank you for sharing.
Have a great weekend Sophia.I look forward to your next post.
ReplyDeleteHello Sophia
ReplyDeleteYour onmatopoeia is so cool i love it and all the popcorn all around so cool and the blue and yellow sill need a bit of work tho.
Hey Sophia
ReplyDeleteI love your work you did it so good
I love it so much
You did a great job
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