Persuasion writting

 

Forest

 

We did soundtrap to record sound  effects for our persuasive slide

Pixton comic

We made comics on pixton telling a story. Here is the link to my story: https://share.pixton.com/q6hju1b

onomatopoeia

We have been looking at ways to add impact to our narratives. We found that onomatopoeia enhances our stories. Here is my onomatopoeia. It is not fully finished yet but I hope you still like it.

Underwater Olympics writing

On your mark, get set, GO!. I swam over the hurdles as fast as I could. I was as fast as a cheatah. Yay! I was in the lead. After all i was the olympic star. Ow my muscles started hurting!. Then a giant fish was coming. I quickly dodged It.Phew!. But I came last. It was still fun though.

Narrative writing

Anna woke up at 3:00 in the morning. She could not get back to sleep. She got dressed and went to her new mirror she brought from the market. She had really long hair so she tied it into a bun. Until … the magic mirror sucked her in!. Anna had woken up in a bed. She got up. Anna then spotted a letter on the table. The letter said, Hello Anna, I see you are reading this letter. I put you in this challenge because you should be able to solve the story?. Well, Goodluck the magic mirror said. “Oh no!” Anna said. So Anna went outside. She went into the forest and got lost. Until she saw a little two story cottage. She went inside. Anna smelt something very good. It was porridge. There were three chairs. Anna sat on chair three. It was too small. Then chair one was way too big. Anna finally went to the medium chair. It was perfect. She ate the porridge. Then she decided to sleep. She slept in the middle bed. Then suddenly three bears came in and the little bear said “waa mummy a girl is sleeping in your bed”. Anna quickly woke up and screamed. She ran out as quickly as she could. She finally woke up she was still in her pjs. It was a dream phew!.

My Matariki Goal

This is my goal this year

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