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Friday, June 11, 2021

My describe and alien spaceship story.

 As I am walking by, people were running in groups of 34. I didn’t know why. So I decided to follow them. Suddenly I hear a BOOM! I quickly run with the people. But it is too late. I have just woken up. I look around the room I woke up in. The walls are very tall, green and grey. There are two big grey tables, a small bed (I woke up on) and a bookshelf. It seems like I'm in a mini jail cell but I’m not that worried.  Out the window It is pitch black. I can see the moon and bright stars. The moon was sleeping but the stars were awake, they were winking at me.As I am walking by, people were running in groups of 34. I didn’t know why. So I decided to follow them. Suddenly I hear a BOOM! I quickly run with the people. But it is too late. I have just woken up. I look around the room I woke up in. The walls are very tall, green and grey. There are two big grey tables, a small bed (I woke up on) and a bookshelf. It seems like I'm in a mini jail cell but I’m not that worried.  Out the window It is pitch black. I can see the moon and bright stars. The moon was sleeping but the stars were awake, they were winking at me. 

All of a sudden I start to hear loud aliens roaring like hungry lions. It suddenly stops.

Eww it stinks like alien socks. I open the window and smell the fresh air. 


 Yumm~ I can smell somethin yummy. It smells like butter chicken pie yum!. “Hello!” some weird alien said. “Hi? Where am I?” I just reply. But then I thought for a second. I am in an alien spaceship!. I scream “I want to go home!”. The weird alien replies “You shall not go home,  I made this butter chicken pie”. “Yum but no thanks' '. “I just wanna go home” I cry. I sigh. 


I have an idea, it had just popped up in my head. The idea is when the boss alien comes in I'll quickly run out of this yucky room, but- one problem there will be guards. I hear that there are only two aliens. Alien 1  is yellow and short and Alien 2 is blue and tall. I must sneak past them. The boss alien comes in. I am now running very quick. I stop for a second to get my breath back. I see that I'm out of the spaceship yay!. I am home in bed. But why? I was dreaming.

 



6 comments:

  1. WOW Sophia.
    This was a really interesting story.Each paragraph I read had me wondering what was going to happen next.
    You described the aliens well and I was able to get a good picture of what they would look like.
    I just hope I don't meet them down the street.I would SCREAM !!!!

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    2. Thank you, what I did next was getting up and getting a snack then watching netflix

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  2. I am so glad you were dreaming Sophia! You made the picture in my mind so real with your amazing describing sentences. Ka pai

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  3. Hey Sopiha
    I love your story about the aliens it is very interesting
    you did a really good on amazing
    From Alysha

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